Showing posts with label stories. Show all posts
Showing posts with label stories. Show all posts

Wednesday, 20 April 2016

starting of school

21 April 2016

Now that school has started, time to compile all my work! yesterday, 20 April we had pitching of our ideas and my teacher gave us very good critiques, though my group was very shocked by these comments as we didn't expect ourselves to do that poorly. We asked the teacher which story was her preference but she said she was neutral with all of them. Though amongst ourselves my group mates are leaning towards the story Underneath. The outcome is still unpredictable.
We are currently trying to fix all the loopholes, we are going to meet on skype tomorrow to discuss on all the stories.

My phone idea got rejected sadly. But its okay, its for the best of the team :)

Wednesday, 9 March 2016

Ideas for team story

10March2016


Here are the stories i came up with in order to contribute to the team:

1.  A killer breakfast. How a simple toast, cereal, sunny-side up can kill someone.


2.  Rainy romance, An outdoor blind date event. Where 1 bachelor meets 100 woman on this event to find 1 person to go on the first date with.

It starts to rain and all the ladies open their umbrellas, covering their faces. Now the bachelor judges them base on their body types and chooses the one he prefers. The lady he chose reveals to have an ugly face. He runs away and dates the lady with a pretty face and nice body.

During the date, he realizes that she has a nasty personality and leaves the restraint. He finds the ugly girl outside the bar crying. He gaves her a rose and tells her he’s sorry.

3.  The evolution of the hand. All the fingers were best of friends and the thumb wasn’t apart from the rest. However something happened, an object got between the thumb and the 4 fingers with all different personalities.

Now the hand, the thumb is separated from the other fingers allowing us to do things and hold objects once in a while he will bond with the other fingers, but most of the time he would just drift away.

4.  Imaginations at night, Every child’s fear is to sleep alone in the night, the child tries to escape bed time but the mother insists pushing him.

Once she shuts the door and the room becomes pitch black, the child’s imagination runs wild. Simple things like clothes on the doorknob, the toys under his bed can become a child’s worst nightmare. The child grabs his teddy bear and his night-light and overcomes all his fears.


5.  Phones, the old(nokia) versus new(smart phone). The Father replaces his old phone with a new one and hands his phone down to his daughter. The daughter was disappointed with what she received as she really wanted a new phone, so she tries to break the phone by abusing it. She received a new phone after a bitter tantrum.

Is thrown in the dustbin. One by one all the smartphones are get cracked in “an accident”. The humans think nothing of it but flashback to all the accidents you would see how the nokia in all the scenes destroying the smartphones.

The father bought more smart phones to replace the broken ones and the nokia just smiled.

6.  Bad breath.

The pipe piper came into the town of Hamelin and started charming the rats that raided the town.
A street kid who was hungry found a reward poster; his thought goes straight to the food. He sees the piper charming the rats so he picks up a straw and blows. All the rats disappear.

The piper gets angry and switches his pipe to high mode, calling for the rats to come. The boy immediately blew into the straw harder and the rats never came.


The piper furious, starts bullying the boy until the boy opens his mouth to say sorry and the bad breath came out causing the piper to faint. The mayor wore a gas mask and handed the boy his reward and breath mints.